I asked three members of my target audience what they thought of my magazine in order to understand what needs to be done to improve it and make it more appealing for the target audience.
'I like the front cover it looks really professional, however it would look a lot better with a little bit more colour to it. The double page spread looks just like a real magazine but the contents page could do with a bit more information on it to fill empty space.'
'I think you need more colour on your front page, maybe change the title colour? also the double page spread needs some sort of line down the middle to show that it is two pages and not just one. I like the layout of the contents page though it looks like a proper magazine'
'I think your title could stand out more on the front cover, the contents page needs a little more oomph as well but apart from that it looks really good.'
This feedback has helped me decide what imporvements are needed to make my magazine look more proffessional and appeal to the target audience. My main focus is on making the front cover look more lively and filling the contents page more.
