After I produced my second draft, I asked for more feedback before creating my final draft. These were the comments I recieved:
Front Cover
~ no mention date and how often it is produced
~bar code seems out of place
~masthead look too big, but lost behind the image
~the main quote doesn't quite make sense
Contents
~There's a few spelling mistakes
~the VERTIGO logo is very small
~some words cross over onto two lines: this looks unproffesional
~the picture of the cover artist is too small
Double Page Spread
~adveritse the album
After recieving these comments I will now create a final draft based on the improvements suggested by my reviewers.
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